Glossing

I think my main issue right now is that I'm taking to much of a stance right off to one side. I think i should provide the reader with more facts and pros and cons from both sides, and also give the reader statistical information that my personal stance. Also there is alot of repetition that i use throughout my essay by using words or sentences that say " humanoid" robots in it. I think i can find another term for these robots maybe droids? I also feel that i can incorporate more personal experiences or examples in my paragraphs to provide structure and stability. The essay flows together well, but some sentence or paragraph arrangements can be done. The themes in my essay are pretty consistent, and the essay ultimately revolves around my topic, i think also i could include some more quotes or paraphrasing. Overall the essay is stable with consistent themes, but could also use some work and revision to make it a better overall research essay.

essay topic 2

For my second essay topic over technlolgy, i have picked the humanoid robot, and its technologically. I think this subject is narrowed down from my original of robitic people from china. There are many topics and debates about thsi subject. One of the most debated topics is what they will do for the economy and community. My question is: Are these humanoid robots or " droids" good for the economy and community? Will they destroy jobs or help production? I think this topic is important because this is were the future lies. Eventually technonolgy will grow so much, that everything will be relied on by computers, maybe even this humanoids. I think this is a solid topic to write about, and most of all it intrest me which makes it easier to research and write about.